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Old 03-14-2008, 12:59
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I would love for anyone who has time to critique my site, and tell me what you like/dislike. I have tons of traffic but not enough sales right now I don't know why if that many people are looking at it nobody is buying. Any pages you think I should take down, etc. Anyways...any feedback is greatly appreciated!
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I went to your site yesterday and added it as a fav!! I love it and seems fairly easy to maneuver!!
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just a couple things I noticed
I would have pic's of your solid bows not just the ribbon
and I think the bottle caps thing is a bit confusing maybe on the same page have them pick the bow color and then the bottle cap?
other then that its easy to navigate
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I usually sell a lot of whatever bow and color I have the pic of. I think its hard for them to imagine a color combo they can see not sure if that makes sense
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The first link I clicked on was "solid bows" and there were no pictures of the bows. If I were buying bows I would not look much further if I didn't see pictures of the product.

I will check out the rest...
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Thank you for the feedback.
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First, when I went to “Holiday Bows”, I was expecting Easter, spring, etc. and found Halloween and Christmas. Anything I buy now for those holidays, I expect to pay about 90% off. I would either remove that page or add more season-appropriate items. The out-of-season bows could also suggest ‘they didn’t sell – what is wrong with them?’

What size are the wall letters? I could not find it anywhere.

On the opening flip-flop page, I think it would be a good idea to mention sizes are available for children to adults.

Paci-clips: I would like to see a photo showing the whole thing (both ends). Maybe add a line or two promoting ‘quick & easy attaching’ or something.

I hope this helps because I HATE being critical!
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I like that you have reasonable bottlecaps. I just might have to order some for my dd's hairbows!!
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