Here it is! a huge wip but it's here!

[Angelsx3]

been working on this since yesterday and I'm finally getting the hang of things. Thanks a bunch to those that helped me here.
http://www.boutiquetinytots.com

Please let me know what you think. I have a bunch of stuff to add but I just wanted to get the basics situated. Will take any and all criticism.

[tisha]

gorgeous!
you must be so proud!

[Princess Babies Bowtique]

Did you make those outfits, too!?!?!?!

Looks great...and don't worry, the site will always be a work in progress! You've done good work so far! Keep it up!

[britt1234]

Hi, great job on the site.. My sister prof reads everything and taught me to "try" to do it,on the basic boutique bows section, the word i think you wanted was are and is ae. On the LLB Section you may want to capitalize the word Soft. Do the same on the other sections. Other than those it looks Great! I love the colors!!! I hope this doesn't offend you, I surely want someone to go in a read everything after I do it. I know I will mess up a ton!

Goooo Boutique Tiny Tots!!

[Angelsx3]

Originally Posted by Princess Babies Bowtique

Did you make those outfits, too!?!?!?!

Looks great...and don't worry, the site will always be a work in progress! You've done good work so far! Keep it up!

My mom helped me with those outfits, they were my first ones. The polka dot was the first and the flamingo was the second. Thanks for looking and the comments.

[Angelsx3]

Originally Posted by britt1234

Hi, great job on the site.. My sister prof reads everything and taught me to "try" to do it,on the basic boutique bows section, the word i think you wanted was are and is ae. On the LLB Section you may want to capitalize the word Soft. Do the same on the other sections. Other than those it looks Great! I love the colors!!! I hope this doesn't offend you, I surely want someone to go in a read everything after I do it. I know I will mess up a ton!

Goooo Boutique Tiny Tots!!

NOT offended at all! TY I will go and fix those. I've been editing for two days and I'm so glad to know someone payed enough attention to notice those mistakes. TY!

[britt1234]

Originally Posted by Angelsx3

NOT offended at all! TY I will go and fix those. I've been editing for two days and I'm so glad to know someone payed enough attention to notice those mistakes. TY!

No problem, I can always see someone elses mistakes, but never can see mine lol.

[Princess Babies Bowtique]

Originally Posted by britt1234

No problem, I can always see someone elses mistakes, but never can see mine lol.

I know! I do that, too! We all need good proof readers, lol!

[Princess Babies Bowtique]

How did you get your banner to change like that? I have been saying for months I was going to make a banner...I like yours!

[j2garnett]

I think it looks great! All that stuff you have on there is a lot of work. If you need any help with WAHMshoppes, let me know. I'm getting pretty cmfortable with it. In addition to capitalizing the first sentence of the description, as was already mentioned, I noticed the following:

This sentence reads weird to me:

All items are handmade by me and quality is what you will get.

Maybe something like:

I hand make all items from quality materials. (?)

Once you click on the link for Basic Boutique Bows, "bows" is not capitalized in the heading or in the link - it would look better is you capitalize it. Also on that page you have Choose clip: partially lined alligator clip, 2 1/4...what is 2 1/4 ? The first sentence says: These bows ae perfect. Need to change to ARE.

LLB section you have "...can be attatched to your choose of lined clip." Need to change "choose" to "choice." Attached is also spelled wrong.

Headbands section I would make this sentence like this for ease of reading: These headbands measure 1" and are perfect for those in-a-hurry, "no-bow" days!

I hope I don't offend - I am a stickler for grammar and spelling! (Hopefully I don't have any mistakes on my site - I've been trying to look, but I have 1 meeeelion things on there )