It looks great for your first try! Now, if you want to experiment, start with changing the shapes of your loops when you first make the figure 8 shape. The narrower the loops, the perkier the bow! The entire bow is changed just by altering those first loops.
Keep practicing and you'll soon be addicted and your bows will get prettier by the day! Thank you so much for taking the time to share on here. There are lots of really nice, helpful ladies. If you have any questions, ask away. It might take awhile or a bump or two to get an answer on this busy forum, but someone will answer.