I think its a good start!
Do you starch your bows? I think that would help, especially with the spikes being a bit floppy.
If I were you, I'd ditch the second yellow bow and the purple surrounds on it. Add the purple surrounds to your twisted instead. And shorten your spikes to match, since they'll be too long if you remove the yellow bow. And maybe add some yellow to your spikes, since you're losing the second yellow bow.
I hope that helps! Keep trying! You're moving in the right direction